Love is patiently waiting,
even if you knew he or she may NEVER come back;
love is giving warm encouragement, so that
he or she will not EVER stumble again.
Love is being altruistic,
always caring about the other;
love is keeping one's promise, so that
mutual trust will NEVER leave you.
Love is eating dinner together,
bringing warmth to the whole family;
love is spending honeymoon alone, retrospecting
the cherished times you have spent together.
Love is not forgetting his or her birthday,so that
he or she will be surprised;
love is being trustworthy, so that
deceit will NEVER exist.
Love is trying your best to succeed,
then there will be no disappointment.
love is burning fire that can
melt your tender and shallow heart.
It's pretty good!
ReplyDeleteThis poem describes certain actions of love people take measures on really well! :)
ReplyDeleteI agree that love is always about trust. A relationship can't be built upon mistrust. A lot of times love is also waiting for the other person. I like this poem.
ReplyDelete-Suzanne L
I really enjoyed reading your poem! I like how you fully described your statements.
ReplyDelete- Amy
I agree that trust is the basis of love. Without trust, two people can never be linked together. I like how you described the image of family eating together. It warms my heart instantly.
ReplyDeleteVery nice^^
ReplyDeleteThe one about birthday surprise is so true. We only plan events for those we love.
And "Love is trying your best to succeed,
then there will be no disappointment." Absolutely. If we tried our hardest to love, there will be no regrets even it was a bad ending, because we tried.
The highlighting of important words that one associates with love brings out the very crux of what you think love is. Very beautiful and rhythmic with a wide range of description
ReplyDeleteWhat a nice poem. Good job
ReplyDeleteNice poem. Effective use of font (Caps) for emphasis.
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